As a development from my original church design i decided to change the line colour to see if that would change other overall aesthetic of the design, unfortunately this didn't change the design much but i found that the lighter lines highlighted the geometric shapes a lot betters so they were more prominent.

Above are my developments of the church design, when given feed back it was mentioned that the church would look better in a pattern so i created the top image were i used 3 of the basic church outlines and created a triangle in the centre to create a form. I then decided to layer the design using different colour out lines of the church, these developments are the bottom two images, i fount that 2 layers of churches(bottom left) worked a lot better than the other developments are it created depth an interest as well as a pattern.
After creating the patterns and overlays i decided to add a gradient the the layers as the colours were limited and i wanted to see what effect it would have if i was to gradually fade in the 'clearest blue'. This effect was more successful on the left image as the fading in was more prominent because of the use of different blues.
To further develop my designs i decided to see what they looked like on a coloured background, experimenting with and without the gradient. I found that the grey looked nice as it allowed the blues to gradually fade in but the blue background with the white pattered stout more as it had the higher contrast and the small colour change gave the sharp geometric pattern a soft look. Out of the above designs i thought that the bottom left was the most successful as the gradient worked well on fading in the blue and softening the overall look of the design, and the grey added depth to the background.
I then decided to experiment by using a print out of the line in black and move the print out along the glass as it scanned so that it distorted the image, to create a similar effect to the one i create on illustrator for the study task. below are the results:
After getting these results i decided to see what they looked like overplayed on a coloured image of the church to see what effect it would have, below are my developments:
The above developments unfortunately were not as successful as i had hoped as the effectiveness of the coloured church was lost with the overlay of the scan.
After the unsuccessful experiment with using the scans as overlays i decide to try them on their own, changing the colour of the lines from what scanned as grey to blue.
The outcome was as above and was very successful as the church was distorted and the lines were no longer as harsh as before. The new shape and colour looked to represent a wave.
I then experimented with adding a gradient to the colour but this didn't add as big of a difference as i though that it would.
After experimenting with gradient i looked back on my previous feedback and remembered that a pattern was recommended and turned the distorted church in a pattern using 2 together and creating 3 horizontal lines to represent the stylised 'E' in chvches. This design worked well as there was a reference to the 'E' and also churches but in a distorted way so that it was not overly obvious.
FEEDBACK
I then received feedback on the about designs and it was mentioned that some of my designs were too complex and didn't need as much detail to get across my intended style, as they thought the more detail the more obvious it become and also that it became too much for the eye.
After receiving this feedback i decided to go back to one of my original designs and try to improve this to improve the effectiveness of the design.
I decided to use my blue squares design and turn it into the shape od the 'v' and 'E' in the bands name, purely using blue squares.
Above are my designs were i used the squares to create a 'V' on the left is the original using the same colours and to the right is the same design with a gradient applied. I found this design effective as the 'V' wasn't very clear straight away and was a loose reference to the stylised name of the band. I thought that the gradient 'V' was the most effective as the blues flowed a lot better, This was similar with the below designs of my representation of the stylised 'E' in churches.
After creating the above 'V' and 'E' designs i decided to experiment with combining the 2 to create a pattern, below are the results:
The design did work and was fairly effective as a pattern but was relevant to my aim of design and took away the effectiveness of the symbols that the shapes created.
Out of all the above experiments and developments i think the most effective designs were the church patterns and the simplistic 'E' and 'V' gradient designs as these implied clues as to who the band was but did this discreetly and well as looking nice a piece of design. The next step is to select the most successful designs and create a mock up of it on a record sleeve and choose which to send off to the competition.