
Above are a few pages from my final crit. The questions i asked were:
1) do you think that my typeface represents the word hesitant?
2) what do you think my typeface would be appropriately use for? - do you agree wit sensitive subjects?
3) do you think my type specimen is over complicated or do you think the layered letters works well as a background?
4) do you agree design 1 was the most successful design to chose as my final typeface? why/why not?
The feed back i received was constructive, and supportive of my chosen typeface, but some thought that my type specimen was a little overcomplicated and would of been more successful if it was simplistic and the background wasn't as overpowering. People agreed that it would be used for sensitive subjects but also suggested that it would be appropriately used for children's books.
From this feedback if i was to improve my designs i would change my type specimen by turning the opacity of the background down to see if that makes the typeface stand out more, if not then i would rework it and make it simplistic by taking the background away.
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