Wednesday, 27 April 2016

Feed back on presentation

After presenting our ideas to Simon and the first years we gathered some feedback in which we could reflect on to further improve or designs. The feedback consists of:
-the actual concept being not related to money necessarily and that a wall street approach may work more effectively.
-To strip back the design in order to focus upon the work


-Within the next presentation look less in depth at the type and more at the deliverables.
-“The typeface is strong and they like it.”
-The concept of using audio is interesting but exhibitions don’t usually have that they focus on the work.
-“How would we make the timeline work?”
-“Consider target audience and design packs and advertising could have a wolf of wall street videos as links to advertise it.”
-“We were told our concept was too ambitious so we need to refine it.”

other things we mentioned then receiving feedback:
Timeline.
Music.
Retro futuristic things like big boxy computers.
Use computer screens as the light thing, info point.
Put up walls - block out windows.
Recycling design aesthetics

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